首段：
① 总体描述：点出主题+对象+时间等
①What is shown in the column chart （ table / line graph ）above indicates/（reveals） that dramatic（remarkable / increrdible） changes have taken place in the market shares of certain brands in the domestic car market from 2008 to 2009.
- 对于 pie chart :What is shown in the pie chart above illustrates that the purpose of travel polled in a certain university.
37 percent of college students travel to appropriate the beauy of the scenery ;
next comes the aim for relieving pressure, account for 33 percent.
②③细节描述：如A急剧上升，B急剧下降，C保持平稳，并指出具体数据
② Based on the statistics given, we may draw the conclusion that （one can see that） ,
- 先具体写国产车,再具体写日本车：there was a marked jump （ascendance / climb ）of 10% to 30% in the 国产车，while that of 日本车 declined significantly, by 30% from 50% to 20%. ③At the same time, the percentage of 美国车 remaind steady;
- 或者先整体对比国产车和日本车： the percentage of 国产车 has been on a rise，
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- while（whereas） 日本车 has witnessed been on a decline.
- 或者这样另起一段对比：③By contrast,(要加逗号) / on the contray, (要加逗号) 日本车 has witnessed been on a decline.
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④再具体描述各自的变化。
第二段：
① 主题句
① The fundamental (primary) factors (causes) contribute to (account for) such a great contrast(such changes / the above-montioned phenomenon) could be summerized as follows.
②、③、④论证原因
- 三点：②At the top of the list, with the continuous improvement of undergrates' living standard, the pursuit of spiritual enjoyment comes after material life is satisfied to a certain extent.
③In addtion,
④Last but not least, the fact cannot be ignored that,
- 两点：In the first place，... In the second place，...
⑤小结(如果写了三点原因，可不写)
As a result，
第三段总结：
Taking all these factors into consideration (With due consideration of all these contributors ), we may predict that
Examples：
Directions Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should
1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments
You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
The pie chart distinctly exhibits the graduation choices of those to-be graduate. Based upon the data provided above, it can be noticed that 45% college students choose to continue with postgraduate education, which ranks the first among all the categories. Those who intend to obtain employment occupy 26%. And the proportions of starting up business, taking part in civil servant exam and studying abroad take up 15%, 8% and 6% respectively.
The contributing factors accounting for this scenario are in the following. To begin with, along with the admission expansion of colleges, quantities of graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. It’s understandable that, faced with the increasingly stern situation of employment （愈加严峻的就业形势） , a great majority of undergraduates choose the way of trying for master programs to deepen their professional knowledge, so as to avoid a period of sluggish job market and better find the development opportunities. Furthermore, we must admit, college students have gradually transformed their outlook on job pursuit. The “iron rice bowl”, namely possessing a stable and lifelong job, such as civil servant, is no longer preferred as before. They now focus more on personal interest. Finally, under the guidance of government and favorable privileges endowed to college students, the proportion of entrepreneurial survival is rising. Hence, growing students take the road of being self-employed.
Given the analysis talked above, we can see traditional occupation view has been broken. Therefore, it is no surprise to see the current scenario, and I believe this condition will continue in the years to come.
Directions Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should
1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments
You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
As is shown in the bar chart，post 80s，post 85s and post 90s value different factors when choosing their careers. Though they all attach more importance to promotion（晋升） opportunities，personal preference, work-life balance and salary and benefits than other factors, there are some prominent differences between the three groups. Besides promotion, the post 80s pay more attention to salary and benefits, which accounts for 20% , while the post 90s lay much more stress on（把重点放在...上） their own preference, accounting for 29.3%.
The differences between them can be attributed to（归因于） diverse factors. For one thing, the fast-developing and increasingly open social environment, especially the development of the Internet and other emerging industries（新兴产业）, has strongly influenced the occupational choices（职业选择）of post 90s（90后）. For another, the new family structure--nuclear family（核心家庭）, as well as the fading notion of “raising children for one’s old age”, has made the post 90s shoulder less family responsibilities than the post 80s, and become more self-directed（自我为中心） when choosing their jobs.
It doesn’t matter what factors one values most, for different people have different demand. What matters is that one has to choose the most suitable job and work hard to realize his value.